Some exercises from class

Synaesthesia

Long shadows, dry wind.
What am I looking at?
Nature contained, sloped.
Tree poised between tuning forks.
Gold standard, measured
against sky. Excess
burned off. Who’ll spend
the light? Shed layers
of topaz, azure, many
shades and hues.
It’s all right we don’t
get to it. Nobody does.
That tree vibrates
at a higher frequency.
Street lights
bright against bright sky,
dark whisper in
crowded room.

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First line/last line

“Yes,” I said, “isn’t it pretty to think so?”

It was a rhetorical question but she took a long drag of her cigarette and blew the smoke in my face in reply, tiny concentric ringlets that seemed to enclose me in a cone of smoke, her eyes gazing from the center of the cone, words rising to the surface clear as day — words there was no dictionary for, compressed bits of emotion, little flecks of light mingled with disdain.

“Ahh — and you’ve felt this way… how long?” I stammered, conceding the ground she’d yanked out from under me, in response to which she mysteriously cupped an elbow in her palm and opened her mouth but made no sound. She removed a card from her purse, placed it face-down on the table, and seemed to float from the room.

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Juan Ramón Jiménez

In spite of endlessness
snow, Yankees, salt
he lost his gonads.

The colors ran. He tripped
over a hole in the carpet
covered by dish suds.

Without eyes or buttons
he suffered to think,
but the absences wavered.

In the balmy endlessness
how soft a wound
his tongue left.

Snow, marmalade, salt. Lost
in the jerky endlessness.

My writing class

It’s the end of another Badgerdog writing workshop. I’m relieved to be done, especially with the twice-weekly drive to Austin dodging rush-hour traffic, but sad to be saying goodbye to my wonderful students. Many of them are going on to college next fall, and I tried to send them off with as much enthusiasm and excitement about writing as I could, knowing that their relationship to the word will undoubtedly change once they get to the University. They’re some very talented and creative kids, and I hope they keep up with the art in some way. I’ve been told that my class snagged the cover of the new anthology, so I’m looking forward to seeing it at the reading at St. David’s this Saturday. Afterwards, Tina and I will go celebrate our “six-monthaversary…”


Vanessa


Laura, a returning student from last term


Carl, another returning student — good luck at UT!


The whole gang of them after the reading


Modelling their new b-dog t-shirts outside

I was just reflecting the other day on how teaching — both this class and the more conventional freshman comp at Texas State — has certainly been different than I thought it would be. Lots of unforeseen pitfalls, moments of insight, experience gathered for the next go-round. I have a lot to learn. But overall, I still find the work rewarding. I mean, look at the smiles (though I doubt my freshmen will be smiling on the last day, or they will, but for different reasons)! Here’s a survey, incidentally, that lists the most “satisfying” jobs — I’ve got two of them…

New Day, New Books…

Wow. Thanks for all the wonderful comments on the last post, everyone; there’s much to add to it, much more to think about, but as was suggested as well, there’s also the business of reading and writing and getting back to the Work, rather than just kvetch about it. In that vein, here are some books that have made their way into my hot little hands over the past week or so.

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Susan Briante’s book, Pioneers in the Study of Motion, is new from Ahsahta Press at Boise State University. “It’s a work of shuddering velocity,” writes C.D. Wright on the back cover, “an ode, a screed, a lament, a love song…” The velocity is that of an acute, lyrical intelligence darting from thing to thing, opening the poetic voice to a broad range of perceptions. I’m especially taken with an intermittent series in the first section of the book, “3rd Day of the Rainy Season,” “5th Day of the Rainy Season,” etc., which read as both an ongoing, submerged “ars poetica”/dialogue with the act of writing, a la Robert Duncan’s interwoven “Structure of Rime” series, and a test of the “velocity” that Wright mentions.

“A teenage boy tugs at his crotch then gestures toward yellowing roses in the sacristy.”

What I admire here is the effortless wedding of obscene to sacred, intimate gesture to public display, internal to external, quotidian to quasi-mystical. And the brave insertion of the “I” in the midst of all these things:

“I carry the Nikon into the sanctuary”

in which the personal’s looked at as no more no less than these disparate elements, thus risked:

“Chickadees fight in a mud puddle”

next to

“But who watches over the woman going to bed in a motel alone?”

which could be the speaker, or someone the speaker thinks of or sees, in any case not privileged, no less tenderly set forth, a splendid juxtaposition full of restraint. (Susan will be reading at 12th St. Books in Austin on Saturday, April 14 at 7pm.)

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Bounce by Duncan McNaughton is new from First Intensity Press. The sense of roving intelligence here is both similar to and vastly different from Briante’s, tending more towards the internal drift and the candid aside, not as fastened to the thingness of things, a “radio for no one” that doesn’t seem to give a damn whether or not you tune in. The poetry here plunges you into a story midstream, a mystery where everything and nothing’s at stake:

just in case

Drifting on fumes, touring the tunnels…
when a good-looking dead woman walks by
on the arm of some fat African king.
Nothing transcendent, table for two. He’s
a nice king. Also I know his date. Great
dancer. Moves like a doe. Mates like one too.
To the king she introduces me as
The Prince of Kissing. The king smiles, bows. We
embrace. I then return to the stage, take
up my ‘oud. The song I make up tells of
a red sash, diamond jewelry, and a corpse.
If you are not careful in the middle
of the night she will make you her private
property. Nothing can abolish her.

_____________
to her admirers

—-wherein the “she” could be poetry, could be the Her of Shakespeare’s sonnets (which McNaughton has written a book about), could be…? The nothing/everything side by side, “Nothing transcendent, table for two” yet “the song… about a red sash, diamond jewelry, and a corpse.”

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Lucky enough to see Catherine Barnett read at the KAP House last weekend, and picked up a copy of her book Into Perfect Spheres Such Holes Are Pierced (available from Alice James Books). There is a sense of story, and a sense of series, again similar but different from the poets mentioned above. For example, there’s the enviable velocity of this passage, from a poem called “The Disbelieving”:

“We all saw how beautiful she looked
those first six months when she walked a thousand miles—”

which accomplishes in two lines, it seems to me, what many novels take hundreds of pages to do (at the same time it’s reminiscent of a Jane Austen-type opening):

“over the University Bridge

and under it
and into and out of the Arboretum
and up the hill to the sundial we circled every day”

a symbolic/impossible sensation of speed, of the swiftness of time’s passing, spread out in space but compressed in time–

“while the days got longer
and my sister more beautiful,
her red hair turning gray…”

until suddenly, inevitably–

“The night after we picked up the ashes
she drew the brass urn into bed with her”

This both being and not being, time’s passing and time’s standing still, the sort of miracle that only poetry, it seems to me, can perform.

“the mother lifting the sheet to see her child
sleeping and dreaming only the bed is empty
and the mother strips the blankets

and strips the sheets
down to the mattress made of stone.”

The last line, arguably, feeling like a bit of a trick; but one that the poem has certainly earned through its utterly brutal, impersonal-but-intimate story, sifted down to a steely core through a dreamlike intensity, a casting off of unnecessary details like names, occupations, causes of death.

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All of the books above, I think, begin to answer some of the questions I had re. “What Use Poetry” (already knowing there were answers, millions of them, else why go on). I’m grateful to everyone who contributed to the discussion, and to these poets for providing much to chew on. Now it’s back to the work…

By the way, here’s a link to Steve Wilson’s interview re. Jack Kerouac recently broadcast for the 50th anniversary of the publication of On the Road.

What use poetry?

Why tell a story when there’s fiction? Why lyricism when there’s music? Why image when there’s film? Why bother when “no one listens to poetry”? Has postmodernism failed / what is postmodernism / are we still living in postmodernism / are we still living in modernism (what’s modernism)??? How does beat work / what’s measure / why rhyme / what’s line / is prose poetry or poetry prose? What’s it mean to say “poetry should be at least as good as prose”? What goes into it? What’s left out?

Should I bother to talk about it? What’s more important, the poet or the poem? Is there “a” poem? Is there a “poem”?

What’s “voice”? How to proceed? Should I know where it’s going? Where’s it going? How should it make me feel? How should it make you feel? Was it good for you? Is there anything missing? Anything more to say? Why should I do it? When should I do it? When do you do it? How long?

Why?